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Post by zamiel on Jan 3, 2011 18:53:16 GMT -8
ZAMIEL VALENTINE.And if you cry I'll hold your head up high I'll be there by your side I will be your Guardian Angel.
OOC alias: Lucifer, Lu, Lulu experience: One Year how did you find us: Ad on another site other characters: None rules password: the lantern
THE BASICS name: Zamiel Valentine nicknames: Black Paladin, Black Knight age: 19 birthdate: 6/17/27 race&species: Telmarine rank: Knight (Black knight with a little magic) occupation: He is a highly ranked Knight in Cair Paravel
THE PHYSICAL body type: Zamiel is thin, but he holds surprising strength. He is built enough for someone of his job. hair: Zamiel has long, light brown hair that is a bit wavy, but straight. He keeps his hair groomed, and shiny. eyes: Zamiel has narrow eyes, that can pierce you, they are light brown. height: 5'9 weight: 169 facial features: Zamiel is your average pretty medieval character, he has a mustache and a beard circling his chin. clothing: Zamiel wears a black tunic, with a lion on the front. He wears a pair of Gothic death pants (Pants with a lace going up the sides). He has a long black cape that goes down to his feet. His sword sit attached to his belt. His boots are heeled and make him look a bit taller. racial features: Zamiel is a telmarine, he has glowing skin, and long wavy hair. anything else: Zamiel has the mark of a rose on his right hand. It appears to be a rose woven with thorns. playby: Stuart Townsend
THE MENTAL likes: * Wine * Pretty Girls * Narnia * Battle * His job * Sleeping * Magic * The Kings and Queens * Friendly people * Food * The color black * Sword fighting
dislikes: * Narnian enemies * Bright Colors * Arrogant People * Gravity (will be later explained) * His father and family * History * Having to wake up early * Evil Magic * Bugs * Over sleeping
strengths: * Walking on walls * Honor for those above him * Sword fighting * Charm * Writing weaknesses: * Arrogance * Speaking out of turn * Anger * Haughtyness * Archery (can't shoot an arrow to save his life) fears: * He fears his past. general personality: Zamiel is as kind and gentle as they come, though his dark past gives him that dark edge to his persona. Dark and charming is only half of who he is. He has a strong sense of justice, and won't accept anything, but the truth. People have often mistaken him for someone un-trustworthy and harmful, but he won't harm you unless you give him a very good reason to. Zamiel is a man of honor and dignity, and a good amount of mental and moral strength. He is extremely friendly, and though you may not see it, he is quite happy. Zamiel enjoys being around people, and loves to meet new people and become friends with them. It may seem perfect, but he is often troubled by his past, and has flashbacks of his father's death by his hands.
THE HISTORICAL parents: Azreal Valentine (Father) siblings: N/A history: Zamiel's father, Azreal, served Miraz during the Telmarine rule. He was a black paladin. After Miraz's death and the war. Azreal wanted nothing more than to continue killing Narnians. Zamiel, seeing this is a threat, killed his father in cold blood, and took his position. Zamiel was only 18 at the time, but was strong with his father's training of him. Zamiel had a small magical ability. He could walk on walls and ceilings, like the rest of the men in his family line. Zamiel mastered this with his father's training. During the next year, Zamiel grew more able with his position. He became more useful, more agile, and became more built up. Though he was a bit lazy, he never gave up a chance to serve his leaders as best he could.
THE ROLEPLAYING canon or original character: Original why do you want to play this character: I feel that Zamiel relates to me, and I can play a black knight real well. take this quiz: www.ponylandpress.com/ms-test.html what was your character's score?: 22 roleplay sample: Zamiel had built a fire. Lovely fire, he thought, Love the way it burns so fiercely. He grabbed a piece of meat and placed it over the fire. After a short while it would be cooked, and he could eat it, then sleep it off. Oh the night sky, how beautiful it was, with it's stars and patches of white, floating by with the breeze. The smoke rising from the ground into the air. Filling it with the aroma of burning wood, and raw meat.
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Susan Pevensie
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Post by Susan Pevensie on Jan 3, 2011 19:37:21 GMT -8
The admins have reviewed your application, and we've found that there are too many inconsistencies in your character's personality and not enough explanation in his history to meet our quality standards. However, if you would like a chance to edit and have us re-examine your application, you may do so. Reply to this thread when the edits are complete. Thank you.
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